dcxwape托福 写作辅导材料.doc

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托福写作辅导材料
托福作文任务描述:
托福作文要求参加考试者在30分钟内进行审题、写作和检查等。写作的字数为220至300字。
分数段:
0分,1分, ,2分,,3分,,4分,,5分,,6分。
写作要求:
6分:Demonstrate petence in writing on both the rhetorical and syntactic levels, though it may have occasional ,在修辞和句法等方面达到定的水平,文章允许出现个别错误。
Effectively addresses the writing task 文章切题,观点明确;
anized and well developed 段落组织有序,合理展开说明;
Uses clear appropriate details to support a thesis or illustrate ideas使用正确的事例支持论点或说明观点;
Displays consistent facility in the use of language 能够流畅地,连贯地使用语言
Demonstrate syntactic variety and appropriate word choice. 句式多样,用词准确。
5分:petence in writing on both the rhetorical and syntactic levels, though it will probably have occasional errors 在修辞、句法方面有一定的表达能力,但文章偶然会有错误。
may addresses some parts of the writing task more effectively than others 能有效地按照要求协作,但某些部分有欠缺;
generally anized and well developed 段落组织基本有序,合理展开说明;
Uses clear details to support a thesis or illustrate an ideas能使用事例支持论点或说明观点;
Displays facility in the use of language 展现出语言的使用能力;
Demonstrate some syntactic variety and range of vocabulary. 有些句式和词汇的变化。
4分:demonstrate petence in writing on both